I wish this was a painting-
I could have changed things around.
His head on your shoulders,
your method to his madness,
his angst on your unfurrowed brow,
your logic on his lack-thereof.
But real life is no Renoir-
and this, an impossible menage-a-trois.
So these colour images are faded.
Here lies the sepia and grey
of a lifetime of dreams:
my truth, your cloak, his dagger, my heart.
Our unfinished masterpiece.
Wednesday, 31 October 2007
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1 comment:
nice
this, neither, is no renoir; more a sort of cubist maquette which you have brought to life with an understated expression of the feelings bubbling within you.
good luck with the completion of your masterpiece
:)
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